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Unfinished Characters
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(07-23-2014, 06:58 PM)Bat Tamer Wrote:  This is off-topic, but I really feel the need to critique the animation presented.
That animation looks fluent, but the positioning is just off. How does someone swing in front of them and magically end up with their weapon behind them and holding it as if he didn't even let go? Also, while he's spinning: when he faces forward during the spin it looks fine. However, when he faces away we see his arms still cover his scythe (it looks like it's running through his shoulder, ouch...). The scythe is too high up.
[Image: uc7038T.png]
Unless those are some sort of holders that are running through the handle (which wouldn't make sense anyway), this doesn't even look right at all.

I believe that you want to check everything again. It was always behind when he was flying.
its just bit poortly sprited at some places. Red lines gets covered by black which are arms of this guy.
more like this http://sketchtoy.com/62313652
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Unfinished Characters - by JoHo15 - 07-23-2014, 04:14 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by Gad - 07-23-2014, 04:19 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by bashscrazy - 07-23-2014, 04:21 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by ThrillerBeat - 07-23-2014, 04:36 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by Gespenst - 07-23-2014, 05:19 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by JoHo15 - 07-23-2014, 05:55 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by Gespenst - 07-23-2014, 06:28 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by bashscrazy - 07-23-2014, 06:38 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by Gad - 07-23-2014, 06:42 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by Gespenst - 07-23-2014, 06:40 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by Dragon5 - 07-23-2014, 06:58 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by Gespenst - 07-23-2014, 07:18 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by JoHo15 - 07-23-2014, 07:27 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by Gad - 07-23-2014, 07:45 PM
RE: Unfinished Characters - by JoHo15 - 07-23-2014, 08:04 PM



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