Story mode (nearly complete story on page 8)

[Memento]

Please comment on the storyline I posted above... It's a long post, but please read it and state your own preferences; just say what you'd like to add or change (or if you don't want to add anything / you're cool with all the decisions the rest of us want to make on the story, just say it too). We need to get a complete script and we need everybody to help on this and agree on a permanent script.

Also, any updates on progress? It's been quite the quiet weekend here on LFE!