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05-03-2015, 07:27 AM
I'll just enumerate everything that I see:
+Nose, and mouth look good
The form of the eyebrows is also good
-While the form of the eyebrows is good, I think they should be rotated a bit to reduce the mad expression on his face (its a bit overkill imo). You could eventually make the eyes just a bit rounder for the same reason. The neck is too big&buff compared to the size of his face. I think the hair should appear a bit spikier. The left jaw could be a little less hooked and you might want to shift the eyes towards the middle of the face a little bit.
About the face expression: it is just something I dislike for this character. Nino's appearance doesn't exactly shout 'rage' in my opinion. I think a more neutral face pic like Dennis' would suit him best (that one doesn't shout 'I'm gonna kill you mothaf***', its more like 'you don't mess with me', which suits the martial artist better.
+Nose, and mouth look good
The form of the eyebrows is also good-While the form of the eyebrows is good, I think they should be rotated a bit to reduce the mad expression on his face (its a bit overkill imo). You could eventually make the eyes just a bit rounder for the same reason. The neck is too big&buff compared to the size of his face. I think the hair should appear a bit spikier. The left jaw could be a little less hooked and you might want to shift the eyes towards the middle of the face a little bit.
About the face expression: it is just something I dislike for this character. Nino's appearance doesn't exactly shout 'rage' in my opinion. I think a more neutral face pic like Dennis' would suit him best (that one doesn't shout 'I'm gonna kill you mothaf***', its more like 'you don't mess with me', which suits the martial artist better.