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08-23-2015, 03:00 PM
well, but maybe first finnish chapter 5. I usually like lf2 stories and i have the willing to watch your series, but i have some suggestions:
in chapter1 dialogues goes so fast, sometime hard to read. there is no background story, they just say we are going to fight bat and firzen but there is no reason why they are doing so, or why bat is evil. too less objects in screen, there are just some chars in the bg who have dialogues and fight. even in playable lf2 there are more stuff such as knifes and boxes. i recommend to add some more things, let's say any tree in LF or any object any bed,table,idk in SP where they are staying. anime is not interesting, beacouse like i said before it needs more meaning. they just go and fight bat and meet jan there and yet we dont know what is there why jan is there what she does there who is she at all, why bat was there who is he etc. same for firzen and everything else.
I think you have watched LFalpha series and they are so cool and also julian war, chapterI and II maybe even more cool. there has been other lf2 animes in youtube, but usually discontinued. actually i liked very much this one https://www.youtube.com/user/darkbiohazard/videos
in chapter1 dialogues goes so fast, sometime hard to read. there is no background story, they just say we are going to fight bat and firzen but there is no reason why they are doing so, or why bat is evil. too less objects in screen, there are just some chars in the bg who have dialogues and fight. even in playable lf2 there are more stuff such as knifes and boxes. i recommend to add some more things, let's say any tree in LF or any object any bed,table,idk in SP where they are staying. anime is not interesting, beacouse like i said before it needs more meaning. they just go and fight bat and meet jan there and yet we dont know what is there why jan is there what she does there who is she at all, why bat was there who is he etc. same for firzen and everything else.
I think you have watched LFalpha series and they are so cool and also julian war, chapterI and II maybe even more cool. there has been other lf2 animes in youtube, but usually discontinued. actually i liked very much this one https://www.youtube.com/user/darkbiohazard/videos