[Char] DennisX - Complete

[Simoneon]

I can see you like your invisibility dash. That's neat. It looks well polished. But what's the story behind him being bipolar with his personality? Why does he occasionally turn into Davis and try to copy him (even though he knows he cannot execute the dragon punch as good as the real senpai)? Visually deceptive - yes, convincing - no, sadly. The other move (which still proves my point about DeniX's bipolarity) strangely looks familiar to Firzen, or Goku, if you're that type of person. But I adore that you make it visually pleasing with the small dust effect on the back and I like that the ball/stream/wave doesn't have shadows on the ground - both of these aspects generously contribute to the whole "polished feel".

Please, bring more!

Also, all hail LFE for its teaching power!