12-08-2015, 12:02 PM
Looks neat! However there are few corrections to be made
1) Her right hand wrist is big. Maybe you need to add the projecting bone signifying the joints.
2) Her outer-garment(Blue) . In that the buttoning points are way too left. Shift it kind of 5-8 pixels to right
3) The pose could look complete if you place her left hand on her left thigh. That way it will look more natural
4) The face looks a bit scary with the eyes, nose and mouth making no relation to the whole face. You will have to place them even more accurately
All-in-all good one
1) Her right hand wrist is big. Maybe you need to add the projecting bone signifying the joints.
2) Her outer-garment(Blue) . In that the buttoning points are way too left. Shift it kind of 5-8 pixels to right
3) The pose could look complete if you place her left hand on her left thigh. That way it will look more natural
4) The face looks a bit scary with the eyes, nose and mouth making no relation to the whole face. You will have to place them even more accurately
All-in-all good one
