Sketchbooks

[Silverthorn]

I feel the composition is a bit lacking. The left one could benefit from some elements in the fore- and background to give it both a sense of scale and/or to emphasize his "where should I go"-stance. As for the right, you probably got quite heavily inspired from all sorts of anime/manga covers/posters, seeing that this kind of multi-character-placing is quite common. Again, try to mess around with the composition a bit, as there is a bit too much empty space for me at the moment. For example, the two people at the front could be placed a tad closer to the viewer in order to cover the white space.

So, basically, it looks quite interesting but try to build up a strong compo for ultimate awesomeness