01-15-2016, 10:27 PM
Thanks
So, as the 7 plot is at the park, so maybe I should try with a crossroad or adding some bushes and trees?
8. Yeah, something like that. As for this as you have already understood, I was trying to make the reader/vewier think "Who is this guy with no head?" "That 2nd guy, is he running or fighting"(That question might appear if you would know the context from the chapter 7) "Why That guy looks with no emotions) and stuff.
So, how about this then?
![[Image: WwXeOki.png]](http://i.imgur.com/WwXeOki.png)
THanks
So, as the 7 plot is at the park, so maybe I should try with a crossroad or adding some bushes and trees?
8. Yeah, something like that. As for this as you have already understood, I was trying to make the reader/vewier think "Who is this guy with no head?" "That 2nd guy, is he running or fighting"(That question might appear if you would know the context from the chapter 7) "Why That guy looks with no emotions) and stuff.
So, how about this then?
![[Image: WwXeOki.png]](http://i.imgur.com/WwXeOki.png)
THanks
