it does sound alright to me (although imo a deeper voice would fit him better, but since its your representative char i guess your original voice is fine
), but don't you have any way to record at a better quality?
@edit just post
maybe something between those two, around the deepness of deeps "ha!" sound

@edit just post

STM1993 edited this post 01-22-2016 03:28 AM because: |
Nope, I don't have a better mic, so this is the best quality I can get. As for deeper, well there's attempt #1 in my editted post. I didn't think it fit to make him sound that deep, so I re-recorded and sped it up. |