Maaan Hari, you are great. Definitely a great progress. These are very well made.
Theres one thing that I need to complain about tho. Your lines are very cracky and unclear. You definitely need to train doing straight lines. I know this might be hard, but that just takes a little of practice. The method i was taught is to take a large piece of paper, draw two dots on the ends and join them together with one clear line. It firstly dont go well, but after some time your strokes will be much more confident and clear. Cheers.
Theres one thing that I need to complain about tho. Your lines are very cracky and unclear. You definitely need to train doing straight lines. I know this might be hard, but that just takes a little of practice. The method i was taught is to take a large piece of paper, draw two dots on the ends and join them together with one clear line. It firstly dont go well, but after some time your strokes will be much more confident and clear. Cheers.