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The Secrets of the shadow Battles.
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11-03-2008, 08:38 PM
Not a bad chapter. Your transitions are good, it kept me reading, but at the end you kinda messed up with my char. Read my profile again. I was a stickman but I have been somehow transformed into a small boy.
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The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 08:34 AM
RE: Story title comming soon! - by vktewari - 11-03-2008, 09:07 AM
RE: Story title comming soon! - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 10:44 AM
RE: Story title comming soon! - by Guigs - 11-03-2008, 04:30 PM
RE: Story title comming soon! - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 04:46 PM
RE: Story title comming soon! - by Guigs - 11-03-2008, 04:53 PM
RE: Story title comming soon! - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 04:58 PM
RE: Story title comming soon! - by Ramond - 11-03-2008, 05:40 PM
RE: Story title comming soon! - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 05:47 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 07:35 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Guigs - 11-03-2008, 07:39 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 08:32 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Zabobula - 11-03-2008, 08:38 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-04-2008, 09:56 AM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-04-2008, 03:40 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Guigs - 11-08-2008, 06:31 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-09-2008, 08:06 AM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-09-2008, 12:11 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-09-2008, 04:25 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-15-2008, 06:05 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-16-2008, 07:34 AM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-25-2008, 04:54 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-25-2008, 05:04 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-26-2008, 05:58 AM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 12-02-2008, 01:19 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 12-25-2008, 09:21 AM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 01-18-2009, 07:54 PM
New chapter of the story Page 1 - by Ascor - 01-20-2009, 07:12 PM
New chapter of the story Page 2 - by Ascor - 01-20-2009, 07:24 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 01-30-2009, 09:11 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 01-31-2009, 10:17 AM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 04-25-2009, 04:13 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 05-24-2009, 08:30 AM
Another secret of the shadow battles - by Ascor - 06-01-2009, 04:23 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 06-07-2009, 06:39 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 07-07-2009, 02:13 PM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 07-09-2009, 11:34 AM
RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 07-10-2009, 12:26 PM



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