JoHo15´s Art

[LutiChris]

I really like the colors and shading you did there but I'm not totally ecstatic on the pose. It could be a bit more dynamic with her legs bent and ready to fight it kinda looks awkward and she is barely holding onto the weapon with her fingers lightly supporting it doesn't make me believe she is ready to fight but just there posing for the camera. i probably wouldn't care if the face was all happy and bubbly but she looks super serious so i think it would make sense to have that mimicked in the rest of the body by giving her that dynamic pose as well as thoroughly grabbing onto her weapon by the palm of her hand instead of just lightly grazing it against her fingers. on top of that you gave her abs which tells me she is serious about working out and trying to look strong the pose doesn't match the rest of the vibe. either make it so that she doesn't look serious/fit or she looks serious and tough, i'd go for that latter option. fix that and you're golden mate