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RazenBrenday's Creation
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this looks good and promising but can be even better with some adjustments here and there imo.

1- i think the upper body movement is a bit exaggerated for just breathing.
2- the legs could be a bit bigger to go with the upper body, his crotch looks too small.
3- his right leg moves while his left leg doesn't. while i think its nice what you tried to do here maybe try a different movement for the legs like a slight bending at the knees to go with the breathing animation instead of the moving to the sides you did here.

4- i like how the bangs on his forehead are animated, you could have done the same to the upper part of the hair as it looks stiff.

5- the upper body could use a slight turn to face the same direction hes looking at, right now i see its facing the screen which is a bit awkward.

6- maybe make his blink to a bit more life to the animation.

anyways like i said, it looks good and promising keep it up.
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RazenBrenday's Creation - by RazenBrenday - 11-16-2018, 08:31 PM
RE: RazenBrenday's Creation - by Simoneon - 12-07-2018, 07:20 PM
RE: RazenBrenday's Creation - by gerseblade - 12-08-2018, 05:19 PM
RE: RazenBrenday's Creation - by RazenBrenday - 05-28-2020, 01:52 PM
RE: RazenBrenday's Creation - by RazenBrenday - 06-27-2020, 03:17 PM
RE: RazenBrenday's Creation - by prince_freeza - 06-28-2020, 10:38 AM
RE: RazenBrenday's Creation - by RazenBrenday - 07-09-2020, 12:02 PM
RE: RazenBrenday's Creation - by RazenBrenday - 08-06-2020, 07:19 AM
RE: RazenBrenday's Creation - by Memento - 08-06-2020, 01:29 PM



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