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~Little Fighter~
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11-09-2008, 04:28 PM
not bad, not bad at all. You have an interesting perspective of the Little Fighter story. I'd like to see more as well. A couple of grammar issues here and there but we all have them.
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~Little Fighter~ - by Hypermodder - 11-08-2008, 11:47 PM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by Hukko - 11-09-2008, 12:07 AM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by Xrink-257 - 11-09-2008, 12:22 AM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by Hypermodder - 11-09-2008, 01:04 AM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by Zabobula - 11-09-2008, 04:28 PM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by Hypermodder - 11-09-2008, 09:31 PM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by Ascor - 11-10-2008, 07:07 PM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by Hypermodder - 11-10-2008, 08:44 PM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by Hypermodder - 11-16-2008, 10:42 PM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by Hypermodder - 03-15-2009, 12:34 AM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by speedthief - 03-15-2009, 07:04 AM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by sadbhav - 03-16-2009, 07:36 AM
RE: ~Little Fighter~ - by The Lost Global Mod - 04-20-2009, 08:24 PM



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