11-23-2008, 07:22 PM
1: The name should look like it's stuck on the shirt, right? make it a little more "wavy". At the moment, the font doesn't look like it's embedded on the shirt, so you need to make it more adhered by moving pixels rows up/down and left/right.
2: Spend a little time on the shading, the hair looks flat, like the shirt, hands, and pants.
3: There's that weird bump in the pants on knee-height.
4: A few pixels of the "base pants" (which I'd identify as Woody's) are visible between the legs. Time to remove them.
That's it so far, I guess.
2: Spend a little time on the shading, the hair looks flat, like the shirt, hands, and pants.
3: There's that weird bump in the pants on knee-height.
4: A few pixels of the "base pants" (which I'd identify as Woody's) are visible between the legs. Time to remove them.
That's it so far, I guess.
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
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