03-30-2009, 04:00 PM
that green font is really unnecessary and makes it just hard to read. Same in here, btw, just so you know.
Also, as about the special attacks you described, all you need is to write down the essential frames. You posted a whole bunch of frames but the only important one in the transformation-thingy, for example, is the last frame. The rest is unneeded for the transformation. You could've at least stated that. People will think that all frames are needed when you do such an attack. Also, there are quite a few spelling mistakes in there. The tables are all messed up, the keywords are not right next to the explanation, making it hard to navigate for beginners. Color changes during the guide are acceptable but here they are unnecessary. The same applies for font-changes; sometimes you use Arial and sometimes Times New Roman.
I'll move this to tuts but I'm not too fond of the current version.
Also, as about the special attacks you described, all you need is to write down the essential frames. You posted a whole bunch of frames but the only important one in the transformation-thingy, for example, is the last frame. The rest is unneeded for the transformation. You could've at least stated that. People will think that all frames are needed when you do such an attack. Also, there are quite a few spelling mistakes in there. The tables are all messed up, the keywords are not right next to the explanation, making it hard to navigate for beginners. Color changes during the guide are acceptable but here they are unnecessary. The same applies for font-changes; sometimes you use Arial and sometimes Times New Roman.
I'll move this to tuts but I'm not too fond of the current version.
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
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