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04-20-2009, 08:21 PM

so time to get an more detailed statement:
your story has potential... things i would improve though:
make the chapters a bit longer, they are just to short.
let it have more depth, i hope you know what i mean.
other than that.. quite good. do you still write on it?

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The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 08:34 AM

RE: Story title comming soon! - by vktewari - 11-03-2008, 09:07 AM

RE: Story title comming soon! - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 10:44 AM

RE: Story title comming soon! - by Guigs - 11-03-2008, 04:30 PM

RE: Story title comming soon! - by The Lost Global Mod - 11-03-2008, 04:43 PM

RE: Story title comming soon! - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 04:46 PM

RE: Story title comming soon! - by The Lost Global Mod - 11-03-2008, 04:47 PM

RE: Story title comming soon! - by Guigs - 11-03-2008, 04:53 PM

RE: Story title comming soon! - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 04:58 PM

RE: Story title comming soon! - by Ramond - 11-03-2008, 05:40 PM

RE: Story title comming soon! - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 05:47 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 07:35 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Guigs - 11-03-2008, 07:39 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Zabobula - 11-03-2008, 07:50 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-03-2008, 08:32 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Bamboori - 11-03-2008, 08:34 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Zabobula - 11-03-2008, 08:38 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-04-2008, 09:56 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by sadbhav - 11-04-2008, 10:21 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-04-2008, 03:40 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Zabobula - 11-06-2008, 02:20 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Bamboori - 11-08-2008, 05:37 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Guigs - 11-08-2008, 06:31 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-09-2008, 08:06 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by SirFrog - 11-09-2008, 09:14 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-09-2008, 12:11 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Zabobula - 11-09-2008, 04:23 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-09-2008, 04:25 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-15-2008, 06:05 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Zabobula - 11-15-2008, 07:34 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-16-2008, 07:34 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Zabobula - 11-17-2008, 01:27 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-25-2008, 04:54 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Bamboori - 11-25-2008, 05:00 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-25-2008, 05:04 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Evil Sonidow - 11-25-2008, 10:13 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 11-26-2008, 05:58 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by sadbhav - 12-02-2008, 10:21 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 12-02-2008, 01:19 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 12-25-2008, 09:21 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by sadbhav - 12-26-2008, 05:44 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 01-18-2009, 07:54 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Bamboori - 01-18-2009, 08:13 PM

New chapter of the story Page 1 - by Ascor - 01-20-2009, 07:12 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by The Lost Global Mod - 01-20-2009, 07:21 PM

New chapter of the story Page 2 - by Ascor - 01-20-2009, 07:24 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by The Lost Global Mod - 01-20-2009, 08:06 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 01-30-2009, 09:11 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by sadbhav - 01-31-2009, 09:05 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 01-31-2009, 10:17 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by sadbhav - 02-01-2009, 12:16 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by The Lost Global Mod - 04-20-2009, 08:21 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 04-25-2009, 04:13 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 05-24-2009, 08:30 AM

Another secret of the shadow battles - by Ascor - 06-01-2009, 04:23 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Reaper - 06-07-2009, 01:44 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 06-07-2009, 06:39 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by The Lost Global Mod - 06-14-2009, 07:07 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Sharkitoon - 07-07-2009, 12:09 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 07-07-2009, 02:13 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Sharkitoon - 07-08-2009, 09:33 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Lord Anu - 07-08-2009, 12:58 PM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 07-09-2009, 11:34 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Sharkitoon - 07-10-2009, 10:20 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Lord Anu - 07-10-2009, 11:39 AM

RE: The Secrets of the shadow Battles. - by Ascor - 07-10-2009, 12:26 PM

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