[CHAR] Sharn (v2.0)

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Ok, this is the second piece of work I've tested of yours, and I must conclude that it is absolutely fantastic !!

However, I do have a few suggestions.

Suggestions:

1. Sprites - Nice Lightning sprites! However, that lightning wave on the ground could be improved; make it more "lightningy" by adding more branches of mini-lightning coming out, or by making it flash .

2. Black Hole - Dude.....an unavoidable, sucking ball that takes out half your life? That is really cheap, especially if you're playing in a crowd.

As for the 500 mp cost, dude honestly, who's going to wait around until his mana gauge is fully charged up? You'd be most likely dead by the time you manage to obtain enough mana to ....much less actually waiting for like three seconds in order to charge it up.

This move is totally unrealistic, and most likely won't be used by anybody in an actual in-game environment.
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However, I think overall this character is extremely creative and quite promising, the best "lightning" character I've ever seen (beats Zeus for sure!) . Which reminds me. When you sprited the lightning, why didn't you steal some of the techniques used to create Zeus? The lightning drawn on that character is a lot more realistic than yours (absolutely no offense to you, of course )

Keep up the good work!

~Solomon Leung