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06-07-2009, 01:44 PM
a bit late, but I just read through the whole story and was wondering why nobody is commenting this although it is one of the best parts of it.
It is sometimes a bit confusing how you talk about something and then let it fall down, but it keeps me interested because i have to use my brain
But its a very good chapter, my ones aren't better... It isn't as long as my ones, but I don't have time to read so much, so its good. And its much funnier...
Hope you are still working on it. I would love to see how it will go on. But don't make it faster because I am waiting for it. Try to keep the quality of the last chapter and it will be very good.
It is sometimes a bit confusing how you talk about something and then let it fall down, but it keeps me interested because i have to use my brain
But its a very good chapter, my ones aren't better... It isn't as long as my ones, but I don't have time to read so much, so its good. And its much funnier...
Quote:One of the guards sighed, "Damnit rain"
Then someone behind him said, "it makes sneaking a lot easier." The guard felt cold wet steal on his throat.
Hope you are still working on it. I would love to see how it will go on. But don't make it faster because I am waiting for it. Try to keep the quality of the last chapter and it will be very good.