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06-13-2009, 05:00 PM
I wasnt bored. Just busy and didnt have time. And I didnt get to comment completely on the story I was on my psp when I wrote that last msg.
Overall it was good but it needed some more humor to balance out the huge wave of depression. I could practically hear the violins playing in the background. O_O Even "28 Weeks Later" (good movie if u saw it) had humor even though throughout the movie it was hugely depressing because of the zombies slaughtering the humans and wot not.
It's always good to have balance in your stories. So that's my challenge for the next time you think about writing a story.
And one question: I was kinda confused at the end. Is Z really dead? His discussion with the Reaper led me to thinking he could still be alive...even though he was...yeah..dead. lol
Overall it was good but it needed some more humor to balance out the huge wave of depression. I could practically hear the violins playing in the background. O_O Even "28 Weeks Later" (good movie if u saw it) had humor even though throughout the movie it was hugely depressing because of the zombies slaughtering the humans and wot not.
It's always good to have balance in your stories. So that's my challenge for the next time you think about writing a story.
And one question: I was kinda confused at the end. Is Z really dead? His discussion with the Reaper led me to thinking he could still be alive...even though he was...yeah..dead. lol
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