yeah... Do you know Terry Pratchett?( asked a similar question before I think...)
In his book the reaper is a person. He kills every dead person with his scythe to set their souls free. Then they have a little time to speak with him before going to the next world.
My reaper is similar to that one. Well, they sometimes have just a dialogue, sometimes a looking-back on the life.
Your Z is dead. He just talked to him and decided to search for his lost memory even after death... in the next world. Together with Marc. Somehow funny to write things like
I don't know why.
I tried to integrate some funny parts, for example with Fred or the reaper
"But as I say often to died people: Try better next time. Somehow nobody is laughing about it.”
But I hadn't enough ideas. Maybe I shouldn't use sonata arctica songs as a source for ideas. The are all so serious.
Btw: That means that there aren't violines, but the beautiful voice of Tony. I normally don't use that word, but it just fits, at least in the ballads.
And it has a happy ending. Everyone is dead but happy. Even Cen, although much bad things were happening to him.
"In his mind he could see the face of Selene, looking into his eyes with a knowing smile. And this time he understood. "
A long time I wasn't sure whether I should use that sentence in the end. I think the last sentence is the most important one, so I had a lot of thoughts and some different ideas for it.
Anyway, I'll try to make it funnier/ maybe less serious next time. Depends on my source of idea.( Maybe "Fly with the black swan?"
)
In his book the reaper is a person. He kills every dead person with his scythe to set their souls free. Then they have a little time to speak with him before going to the next world.
My reaper is similar to that one. Well, they sometimes have just a dialogue, sometimes a looking-back on the life.
Your Z is dead. He just talked to him and decided to search for his lost memory even after death... in the next world. Together with Marc. Somehow funny to write things like
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I tried to integrate some funny parts, for example with Fred or the reaper
"But as I say often to died people: Try better next time. Somehow nobody is laughing about it.”
But I hadn't enough ideas. Maybe I shouldn't use sonata arctica songs as a source for ideas. The are all so serious.
Btw: That means that there aren't violines, but the beautiful voice of Tony. I normally don't use that word, but it just fits, at least in the ballads.
And it has a happy ending. Everyone is dead but happy. Even Cen, although much bad things were happening to him.
"In his mind he could see the face of Selene, looking into his eyes with a knowing smile. And this time he understood. "
A long time I wasn't sure whether I should use that sentence in the end. I think the last sentence is the most important one, so I had a lot of thoughts and some different ideas for it.
Anyway, I'll try to make it funnier/ maybe less serious next time. Depends on my source of idea.( Maybe "Fly with the black swan?"
)

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