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Deadly past
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No words.. lets just get started.

Prologue
The moon was shining on the leaves of a cherry-tree. It was a silent night. No movement. No sound. Not even a little breeze. Without making any noise, a man entered the woods. He was wearing a big hat which hid his eyes and made it hard to see his face.

A katana was hanging on the left side of his belt. His left hand was always centimeters above the katana, ready to use. The way he followed leaded to the next town. He had passed the woods and was now looking up to the sky. The moon was still shining and the stars were glowing. It was revealing the secret he was hiding.

A big scarf on his left cheek interfered with his in other respects perfect face. He continued his walk in the same speed as before. Few minutes later he stopped again, looking at a signpost. It said Sakai.

The man took a small piece of paper out of his robe. He looked at it and then looked at the signpost again. Then he continues his way. A few meters after the signpost, lights showed up. It’s the city he was searching for. He now moves a little bit faster and his hand clutches the handle of his katana.

For him it was like entering a new world. A world he would leave behind if he could. He was looking around when a girl caught his attention. He quickly took out the paper again and looked at it. His eyes widened. The girl was walking right into a dark alley. He quickly followed her.

After few meters the girl realized that the alley turned out to be a blind alley. But it was already too late. The man was running in her direction, pulling out his sword. The girls eyes widened and she was unable to move. The man jumped in front of her, pointing the tip of his sword at her throat. “Now you are going to die”.


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Deadly past - by The Lost Global Mod - 06-14-2009, 02:17 PM
RE: Deadly past - by Reaper - 06-14-2009, 02:23 PM
RE: Deadly past - by The Lost Global Mod - 06-14-2009, 02:32 PM
RE: Deadly past - by Silverthorn - 06-14-2009, 02:47 PM
RE: Deadly past - by Azriel - 06-16-2009, 11:57 AM
RE: Deadly past - by Ascor - 06-14-2009, 07:07 PM
RE: Deadly past - by snorsorbet - 06-14-2009, 08:05 PM
RE: Deadly past - by The Lost Global Mod - 06-14-2009, 08:09 PM
RE: Deadly past - by Lord Anu - 06-15-2009, 05:39 PM
RE: Deadly past - by Elias - 06-16-2009, 01:26 AM
RE: Deadly past - by Zabobula - 06-16-2009, 02:33 PM
RE: Deadly past - by The Lost Global Mod - 06-16-2009, 05:51 PM
RE: Deadly past - by Zabobula - 06-16-2009, 06:37 PM



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