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06-14-2009, 08:05 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-14-2009, 08:12 PM by snorsorbet.)
Uhm...
One thing is that the characters aren't that interesting. Actually I'm not, sadly, caught by the story at all. I'm not sure why... Everything just seems so "cold". Probably because you can't "see their faces" by reading the story, or you don't know the characters at all so you don't really care about who dies. Otherwise, good. It has a good atmosphere and you can really "see" the surroundings.
EDIT: I gave in to your ad.
EDIT2@v: Hmm... That forces me to read more in order to be pleased, doesn't it?
One thing is that the characters aren't that interesting. Actually I'm not, sadly, caught by the story at all. I'm not sure why... Everything just seems so "cold". Probably because you can't "see their faces" by reading the story, or you don't know the characters at all so you don't really care about who dies. Otherwise, good. It has a good atmosphere and you can really "see" the surroundings.
EDIT: I gave in to your ad.
EDIT2@v: Hmm... That forces me to read more in order to be pleased, doesn't it?