06-20-2009, 01:17 PM
well, second one was just great before, its is great now, too.
First one looks pretty interesting, but the special thing about it is mainly in the middle and bottom. Means that the upper part isn't that interesting. But if you delete it, it would probably look so... restricted. I don't know how to say it. It would lose the impression of the wide sky a bit. So well, the upper part is bothering me a bit, but I don't know how to make it better.
Anyway, nice work.
First one looks pretty interesting, but the special thing about it is mainly in the middle and bottom. Means that the upper part isn't that interesting. But if you delete it, it would probably look so... restricted. I don't know how to say it. It would lose the impression of the wide sky a bit. So well, the upper part is bothering me a bit, but I don't know how to make it better.
Anyway, nice work.

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