Contest #5: Writing Challenge

[Lord Anu]

kayz.. my entry..
topic is the summer...
i don't think i will win with this.. but who cares?

story (Click to View)

Summer Love
Loud clangor disturbed my peaceful sleep. I slowly opened my eyes and tried to find out from where the clangor came. The source was my mobile phone with the built in alarm bell. My hand moved on its own and pressed the right button to stop it. I quickly looked around me. “Where am I?” I said myself. The bed I was lying in wasn’t mine, the very same was the room. I couldn’t even recognize a single detail. As I stood up I noticed a small paper under my feet: a ticket. All of the sudden I remembered where I was. I was in the middle of the sports week in Croatia. My wristwatch showed me “7:00”. “sh*t, got to hurry now” I silently said to myself. I quickly changed my clothes and was already on the way to the restaurant. My feet were moving pretty fast and I could hear them pad on the asphalt. I was nearly there when I bumped into something soft. I looked up and saw a girl with brown hair, beautiful green eyes and tanned skin stumbling back. Instantly I grabbed her hand and dragged her towards me. She smelled like the ocean breeze combined with a little bit cinnamon. I quickly let go of her. “You jerk, can’t you watch your steps?” she said with her soft and nice voice. “I am sorry! “ I replied nervously. She looked into my eyes with an intense look. I simply looked back. Her mouth opened and closed again several times as if she wanted to say something. “Now or never” I said to myself silently and then raised my voice: “Can I repay you with a drink at the evening?” She looked at me again and wrinkled her forehead. “Okay, we will meet here again” I heard her saying as time passed. She then moved onwards and I still couldn’t get my eyes off her. In a moment of shock I remembered what I was about to do. I quickly ran to the door of the restaurant and already saw the waitresses cleaning up the buffet. “That means no breakfast today” I cried.
Time passed and finally the sun set down. I was standing at the same spot, waiting for her. My feet were carrying me around in a circle because of my jumpiness. Finally I heard steps behind me. She appeared in a deep-blue dress and I was simply enchained by her looks. She looked at me and then we both were going to the next bar. As promised I bought her a drink there. We both didn’t say much. I simply looked at her and she just looked back. All of the sudden she took my hand and dragged me with her. I didn’t even want to resist and found myself at the beach again after she let go of me. “Isn’t it beautiful?” she asked me. “Yeah” I answered. We both were sitting in the soil of the beach next to the deep and dark sea. Something was touching my hand. I looked at her and saw that it was her hand again. She looked at me with her deep, green eyes and moved towards me. Her face was only centimeters away from me. She was getting closer and closer. Her lips touched mine and I felt like I was in heaven. My body felt so light and my feelings exploded. Finally our lips let go of each other. We were smiling at each other and she now was lying in my arms. She and I looked at the sea again which now looked like a firework of colors to me.

Omg!!Such a great story... I almost cried at the end!! If I could vote for one story then this is the right one!( Phil you are good with describing feelings )
@Edit: I started to write again story Cursed Angels . Next chapter coming soon!