Sorry for double post guys, but you forced me to do that...
I didn't post here a new chapter for a very long time, and so here it is. Pls tell me if I was making mistakes in english grammar again so I can know what I must practice.
Oh and I created a map... It's not finished yet but, as you see, most of lands and continents are finished.
Here you go, enjoy
Trip to Azgarnia (part 2)
After 4 brothers and 2 sisters get out of the jungle Wamilis, they started to climbing over the hills and highlands. The path was hard and full with the rocks and thick mud. When the night came, they were came in front of the sea. They decided to have some rest there and sleep… Early in the morning, 4 brothers made 2 small boats. After all ate they boarded in boats. Long way across the sea wasn't hard. Time was nice and sunny. After 2 days they came to coast. They also slept there. In the morning Anubis and Sharky get up and Anubis made some warm tea…
- I am tired of this journey.- Anubis said.
- Hehe, you need to relax brother. You're working to much and hard, but you shouldn't. One girl would good come to you…-
- No Sharky. I was gladiator, I was killing so much creatures. None girl wouldn't be with the killer like me.-
- But…- Sharky started to talk, but then Kira get out of her tent to have a little walk.
Sharky looked at her a** and then he looked Anubis. Anubis looked at her too.
- Ahh… You like Kira!- Sharky said a little louder.
- Quiet you idiot! You looked at her too!-
- Yes, but we are only friends… You didn't talk with her since that day, when I saw you so mad. What happened?-
- Complications Sharky…-
- What complications!? I think that you're in stress from killing so many creatures, and that bloody pictures are still in your head.-
- I think that you should shut up!-
- Aw come on brother! Look at me Anubis! You have to relax! Just look!-
Then Sharky get up and go to Kira. He came to her and he started to talking something with her. Then them 2 started to dance easy and slowly… Anubis just looked at Sharky. Soon Sharky started to getting closer to Kiras lips, but she stopped him and crash him down. She left and Sharky was crawling back to Anubis.
- Since when you know how to dance?- Anubis asked.
- You see!? I am relaxed! I don't think about troubles like you do! Come on brother you can have her! You're smart, strong, pretty and…-
- I want you to answer me on my question.-
- I learned it in jungle Wamilis… Mathayis and norgs know to dance really good.-
And so… Them 2 were talking about dancing and Sharky's skills. For that time Mayon, Tory and Iry finally woke up.
- What the hell are you talking about?- Tory asked.
- Sharky know to dance…- Anubis answered.
- Haha really? I think you're to serious to talk with him Anubis.- Tory smiled
- You are to serious Tory. I can listen him, but you can't…- Anubis smiled to him.
- Where is Kira?- Iry asks.
- I think she is a little angry on Sharky…- Anubis answered.
- Why?-
- Because I think Sharky is fool…- Anubi smiled.
- You enjoy when I am angry don't you Anubis?- Kira appeared.
- A little, but… I enjoy more by watching Sharky's jokes.- Anubis answered
- So this is the kingdom Arandar?- Mayon asked.
- Yes and if I am right, this kingdom once belonged to men… now it belong to Orcs so we could get in troubles here until we don't get to kingdom Azgarnia.- Anubis answered.
- How you know all of that? You was captured in Dumlind for 15 years.- Iry said.
- Anubis is smarter than he looks I guess. But he is weak girl…-
- O really Tory?!- Anubis yelled and jumped on him.
Them 2 started to fight on the ground, but soon Mayon separated them. So they started walking. They should go on the east side of the coast and then they should go on the south. They planned to go near the sea and cliffs. orcs didn't go there cus cliffs were weak and they could crash in the shallow sea. 4 brothers and 2 sisters with them trveled 4 days until they didn't get to the border between Arandar and Azgarnia. They should finally sleep that night, but somebody must stay awake and guard if orcs appear. Kira said that she will guard and that's how it was. That night the thick rain started to fall, thunders were echoed and the strong wind was blowing. Sea was rough and severe. Sky was black and there were no stars or moon. Kira was sitting on one big rock lookig at their tents. Tents were solid and they could take that storm. Suddenly Kira saw somebody in the dark, but she couldn't see his clothes and face, because there was to much dark. The person was big enough to be a male.
- Who are you?!- Kira yells, but the guy didn't answered.
- Answer me!! Show yourself or I will kill you!!- Kira yells again and then the guy show himself.
- Hello Kira… I am lord Anubis. General of king Jordy's army.- Anubis appeared.
- Damn! You scared me so much! Don't do this anymore!-
- I can't sleep beacuse of this thunders. They are to loud.-
- Hmm… I see. So, you wanna be Jordy's general?- Kira asks.
- I would like to help the humans to get back their kingdom Arandar. King Jordy is in big trouble and all humans too. I wanna help them. I've heard that they have no enough food in Azgarnia and so they have to attack orcs at the Arandar.-
- You know… You're not that stupid and crude as you're pretending that you are.-
- Well... I know to be gentle.-
- I see. You like watching me when I'm angry?- Kira asked.
- Nah I just like watching you… Just that. I could watch you all the day, and… I'm not getting bored when you are here. I'm sorry because our little fight.-
- Yea me too. But I forgive you now…- Kira said and they started to getting more and more closer to each other.
Suddenly Anubis grabbed Kira and push her away. Then a lot of arrows started to falling on Anubis, but he pulled out his sword quickly and defended himslef, but 1 arrow zak in his leg.
- Ahhh!!!- Anubis shouted.
Tory, Mayon, Sharky and Iry quickly woke up and got out of their tents.
- Help us guys!!! Orcs are here!!!- Kira yelled and others came to her and Anubis.
Tory run at the crowd of orcs and started to throwing them and smashing their bones with great hammer. Sharky disappeared in front of Kira, Mayon, Iry and Anubis like a dust and he appeared at the crowd of orcs. Then he started to helping Tory, killing orcs with 2 round blades, so they can't get surrounded by orcs.
- Come on Iry! Let's take the archers! You just run to them and I will clear you the path with spells! Go!- Mayon yells and Iry listen to him.
Iry was killing archers with her saber and Mayon was watching her back. Kira was helping Anubis to fight. She killed any orcs that came near her and Anubis. Anubis was a little weak, but still not useless. He was standing next to Kira and helping her to fight. Soon all orcs were dead. Sharky and Tory go really far and they were still killing some of them. After some time Sharky and Tory come back.
- This guys are really stupid! 4 days of walking and run without any sleep! And now when I can finally get some rest, they appear in the middle of the damn storm!!-
- Sharky come down!- Mayon yells.
- How many orcs there were?- Iry asked.
- About 450. We are not bad.- Tory answered.
- Tory you're bleeding…- Anubis said.
- It's nothing! Just a little scratch! I'm not very fast with the hammer and there is a lot of them so… I must get a few easy hits. I will be ok!- Tory said and started to destroy their tents.
- Hey what are you doing?!- Mayon yells.
- We won't need them anymore… We are almost in Azgarnia and soon we will arrive at the Crypton. City of kings.- Tory answered.
- Oh! Let me help you! I like tear things!- Sharky said happy and started to helping Tory.
6 Friends traveled 1 more day, and without any more problems they arrived at the city of king, city called Crypton.
To be continued...

I didn't post here a new chapter for a very long time, and so here it is. Pls tell me if I was making mistakes in english grammar again so I can know what I must practice.
Oh and I created a map... It's not finished yet but, as you see, most of lands and continents are finished.
Here you go, enjoy
Trip to Azgarnia (part 2)
After 4 brothers and 2 sisters get out of the jungle Wamilis, they started to climbing over the hills and highlands. The path was hard and full with the rocks and thick mud. When the night came, they were came in front of the sea. They decided to have some rest there and sleep… Early in the morning, 4 brothers made 2 small boats. After all ate they boarded in boats. Long way across the sea wasn't hard. Time was nice and sunny. After 2 days they came to coast. They also slept there. In the morning Anubis and Sharky get up and Anubis made some warm tea…
- I am tired of this journey.- Anubis said.
- Hehe, you need to relax brother. You're working to much and hard, but you shouldn't. One girl would good come to you…-
- No Sharky. I was gladiator, I was killing so much creatures. None girl wouldn't be with the killer like me.-
- But…- Sharky started to talk, but then Kira get out of her tent to have a little walk.
Sharky looked at her a** and then he looked Anubis. Anubis looked at her too.
- Ahh… You like Kira!- Sharky said a little louder.
- Quiet you idiot! You looked at her too!-
- Yes, but we are only friends… You didn't talk with her since that day, when I saw you so mad. What happened?-
- Complications Sharky…-
- What complications!? I think that you're in stress from killing so many creatures, and that bloody pictures are still in your head.-
- I think that you should shut up!-
- Aw come on brother! Look at me Anubis! You have to relax! Just look!-
Then Sharky get up and go to Kira. He came to her and he started to talking something with her. Then them 2 started to dance easy and slowly… Anubis just looked at Sharky. Soon Sharky started to getting closer to Kiras lips, but she stopped him and crash him down. She left and Sharky was crawling back to Anubis.
- Since when you know how to dance?- Anubis asked.
- You see!? I am relaxed! I don't think about troubles like you do! Come on brother you can have her! You're smart, strong, pretty and…-
- I want you to answer me on my question.-
- I learned it in jungle Wamilis… Mathayis and norgs know to dance really good.-
And so… Them 2 were talking about dancing and Sharky's skills. For that time Mayon, Tory and Iry finally woke up.
- What the hell are you talking about?- Tory asked.
- Sharky know to dance…- Anubis answered.
- Haha really? I think you're to serious to talk with him Anubis.- Tory smiled
- You are to serious Tory. I can listen him, but you can't…- Anubis smiled to him.
- Where is Kira?- Iry asks.
- I think she is a little angry on Sharky…- Anubis answered.
- Why?-
- Because I think Sharky is fool…- Anubi smiled.
- You enjoy when I am angry don't you Anubis?- Kira appeared.
- A little, but… I enjoy more by watching Sharky's jokes.- Anubis answered
- So this is the kingdom Arandar?- Mayon asked.
- Yes and if I am right, this kingdom once belonged to men… now it belong to Orcs so we could get in troubles here until we don't get to kingdom Azgarnia.- Anubis answered.
- How you know all of that? You was captured in Dumlind for 15 years.- Iry said.
- Anubis is smarter than he looks I guess. But he is weak girl…-
- O really Tory?!- Anubis yelled and jumped on him.
Them 2 started to fight on the ground, but soon Mayon separated them. So they started walking. They should go on the east side of the coast and then they should go on the south. They planned to go near the sea and cliffs. orcs didn't go there cus cliffs were weak and they could crash in the shallow sea. 4 brothers and 2 sisters with them trveled 4 days until they didn't get to the border between Arandar and Azgarnia. They should finally sleep that night, but somebody must stay awake and guard if orcs appear. Kira said that she will guard and that's how it was. That night the thick rain started to fall, thunders were echoed and the strong wind was blowing. Sea was rough and severe. Sky was black and there were no stars or moon. Kira was sitting on one big rock lookig at their tents. Tents were solid and they could take that storm. Suddenly Kira saw somebody in the dark, but she couldn't see his clothes and face, because there was to much dark. The person was big enough to be a male.
- Who are you?!- Kira yells, but the guy didn't answered.
- Answer me!! Show yourself or I will kill you!!- Kira yells again and then the guy show himself.
- Hello Kira… I am lord Anubis. General of king Jordy's army.- Anubis appeared.
- Damn! You scared me so much! Don't do this anymore!-
- I can't sleep beacuse of this thunders. They are to loud.-
- Hmm… I see. So, you wanna be Jordy's general?- Kira asks.
- I would like to help the humans to get back their kingdom Arandar. King Jordy is in big trouble and all humans too. I wanna help them. I've heard that they have no enough food in Azgarnia and so they have to attack orcs at the Arandar.-
- You know… You're not that stupid and crude as you're pretending that you are.-
- Well... I know to be gentle.-
- I see. You like watching me when I'm angry?- Kira asked.
- Nah I just like watching you… Just that. I could watch you all the day, and… I'm not getting bored when you are here. I'm sorry because our little fight.-
- Yea me too. But I forgive you now…- Kira said and they started to getting more and more closer to each other.
Suddenly Anubis grabbed Kira and push her away. Then a lot of arrows started to falling on Anubis, but he pulled out his sword quickly and defended himslef, but 1 arrow zak in his leg.
- Ahhh!!!- Anubis shouted.
Tory, Mayon, Sharky and Iry quickly woke up and got out of their tents.
- Help us guys!!! Orcs are here!!!- Kira yelled and others came to her and Anubis.
Tory run at the crowd of orcs and started to throwing them and smashing their bones with great hammer. Sharky disappeared in front of Kira, Mayon, Iry and Anubis like a dust and he appeared at the crowd of orcs. Then he started to helping Tory, killing orcs with 2 round blades, so they can't get surrounded by orcs.
- Come on Iry! Let's take the archers! You just run to them and I will clear you the path with spells! Go!- Mayon yells and Iry listen to him.
Iry was killing archers with her saber and Mayon was watching her back. Kira was helping Anubis to fight. She killed any orcs that came near her and Anubis. Anubis was a little weak, but still not useless. He was standing next to Kira and helping her to fight. Soon all orcs were dead. Sharky and Tory go really far and they were still killing some of them. After some time Sharky and Tory come back.
- This guys are really stupid! 4 days of walking and run without any sleep! And now when I can finally get some rest, they appear in the middle of the damn storm!!-
- Sharky come down!- Mayon yells.
- How many orcs there were?- Iry asked.
- About 450. We are not bad.- Tory answered.
- Tory you're bleeding…- Anubis said.
- It's nothing! Just a little scratch! I'm not very fast with the hammer and there is a lot of them so… I must get a few easy hits. I will be ok!- Tory said and started to destroy their tents.
- Hey what are you doing?!- Mayon yells.
- We won't need them anymore… We are almost in Azgarnia and soon we will arrive at the Crypton. City of kings.- Tory answered.
- Oh! Let me help you! I like tear things!- Sharky said happy and started to helping Tory.
6 Friends traveled 1 more day, and without any more problems they arrived at the city of king, city called Crypton.
To be continued...

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