My first tut about making hair

[Alectric]

im sorry, but hacker is right. it lacks detail, and is essentially just a weird flat shape on top of the head..
to be honest, they all seem to be bad toupee's... (google it, it means wigs)

and another point, dont blur the hair. you lose detail (Even though there was none to begin with)
and it comes out messy.

please look a my tutorial

Hair tutorial (Click to View)

you've got some things right, its just you need to practice your hair shapes, because like i said, they are just obscure at the moment, and it doesnt look like hair.