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Looks quite interesting. Just two things:
- Is it maybe possible to make a transition for example between forest and ice? I know its not easy, but if you can do that its good.
- If the city in the east is for the demons I would leave it out because we don't know where we will go. or where the demons come from.
Oh and as Quarzt is the capital there is no bigger city I guess. And I don't want to fight in a big town again, maybe later. We will see where we go when the next person posts. It is in your hands, but I would recomment that we either go to the point where the demons first appeared( according to the backstory some of them did) or to someone who knows about them.( Maybe Noir gives us a task?) I think we shouldn't go to some kind of castle where the evil king is. It would be too short.
But as I said, first who writes can decide some of these things.
Btw: Harold and Hacker could also be in the forest in the west... Or isn't it a forest?
- Is it maybe possible to make a transition for example between forest and ice? I know its not easy, but if you can do that its good.
- If the city in the east is for the demons I would leave it out because we don't know where we will go. or where the demons come from.
Oh and as Quarzt is the capital there is no bigger city I guess. And I don't want to fight in a big town again, maybe later. We will see where we go when the next person posts. It is in your hands, but I would recomment that we either go to the point where the demons first appeared( according to the backstory some of them did) or to someone who knows about them.( Maybe Noir gives us a task?) I think we shouldn't go to some kind of castle where the evil king is. It would be too short.
But as I said, first who writes can decide some of these things.
Btw: Harold and Hacker could also be in the forest in the west... Or isn't it a forest?