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Z, the wandering redhead, kept to the shadows and away from the open areas for fear of encountering more demons. Even though the city had been abandoned thereafter, there was still the chance of stragglers. The pain in his stomach had gone away and he proceeded trying to wake his conscience with a fleet of questions.
“Stickman, what am I to do now? Where should I go? Why didn’t we go with those groups of soldiers?”
“The outcome wouldn’t have been pleasant if we went along with them,” his conscience spoke out, “that’s all you need to know. But it seems to me that I was wrong. We are going to have to follow them after all. My senses were confused. There was too many energy signatures blocking my sense and it made it hard for me to pinpoint the man who we are looking for.”
Z grew tired of all the secrecy, “And just who are we looking for anyway?”
“An old man who lives in the forest area,” his conscience spoke out to him.
“An old man?” Z was a bit unhappy about that answer. “What the Hell is an old man going to do for us?”
“That ‘old man’ has something of great power. That ‘old man’ has the power to release us from our fused bonds! Do me a favor and not doubt my judgment.”
Z was silent for the moment. He was still uneasy about the whole situation. Suddenly he heard rocks fall over and immediately looked in that direction. Four demons stood smirking at him from above.
“Oh this isn’t good, they found us!” Z spoke to himself.
“Run now!” Z’s conscience shouted.
Z began running in the opposite direction as fast as he could out into the open area.
The skies began turning grey overlaying the bright sun. All of the area around the city became shaded with darkness. One small drop of rain fell and then another until a small downpour began.
Several more demons joined the pursuit of the fleeing redheaded man. Some were flying and some chased him on foot, laughing hysterically.
“You cannot escape, human!” One of them yelled out closing in on Z.
It swooped down and grabbed Z by his neck collar lunging him into the air.
“Aaaahhh!” Z cried out as he was thrown into the air and fell down hard into a pile of debris in a large crash.
The small group of demons surrounded him and pulled him out of the debris. They noticed a small change in his eyes but didn’t think anything of it and started pounding away at him. As Z was constantly struck, the pain of each hit was slowly going away and his anger began rising overpowering the agony. One of them clawed at his face creating 4 slash marks on his right cheek. Another one kicked him so hard he slammed into a wall several yards from their location. Bruised and beaten, Z slowly began rising up spitting blood from his mouth. The demons were amazed at his resiliency and walked towards him preparing to strike again.
“This one is a tough shell to crack,” One of the demons said smiling at another.
“Well its time to end this and be on our way,” Another demon said. “Our master is waiting for us.”
The demon pulled back his dark fist and prepared to deliver the final blow. However, he was stopped by the look in Z’s eyes. The colors of his once-purple eyes had turned completely crimson red. It was something the demon had never seen in a human before.
“What the Hell are you?” The demon had been completely paralyzed looking into Z’s blood red eyes. The others were confused.
Z’s tone of voice had changed dramatically, as if he was controlled by someone other than himself, “I am the Crimson One!”
After he said that, his entire body began glowing a fiery purple. Z began looking at his body confusingly. He felt completely changed and held his forehead with his hands feeling the burning sensation all over. He began yelling in anger and in agony unleashing a powerful wind. The demons took several steps back from him and some attempted to flee...but it was too late.

Sonidow felt a strange wind pass him. He looked back in the direction where the city was, far away. He couldn’t see anything but he knew something had happened. The others had noticed something was wrong but Sonidow looked forward and urged them on and not to worry.
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
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