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08-14-2009, 03:09 AM
I'm not trying to discourage you or anything..but you've got to be a little more serious. This doesn't even qualify as a LF2 Sprite. It's not even a sprite at all.
This is more suited for my "Random Image of the Day" thread than here.
I was contemplating closing this thread...but I'm not that heartless. Unlike some people...whEeze..cough...Sneeze. :P
Ok now that that's all out of the way. I'm critique it:
It's lacking ALOT. If you want this to qualify as an LF2 sprite...it should at least be in the proper dimensions. (Unless I'm wrong and this is a draft for a character maybe?) In my opinion, he's way too square...his arm looks like Chuck Norris broke it in three places...with his pinky finger, and to be even more obvious...he needs color. -_O
The only thing remotely interesting about this piece is his head...and I don't even know why.
So yeah...advice? PRACTICE a bit more. Work in the appropriate dimensions and..if you need to...use template as..well...a TEMPLATE. :P
That's all I got.
This is more suited for my "Random Image of the Day" thread than here.
I was contemplating closing this thread...but I'm not that heartless. Unlike some people...whEeze..cough...Sneeze. :P
Ok now that that's all out of the way. I'm critique it:
It's lacking ALOT. If you want this to qualify as an LF2 sprite...it should at least be in the proper dimensions. (Unless I'm wrong and this is a draft for a character maybe?) In my opinion, he's way too square...his arm looks like Chuck Norris broke it in three places...with his pinky finger, and to be even more obvious...he needs color. -_O
The only thing remotely interesting about this piece is his head...and I don't even know why.
So yeah...advice? PRACTICE a bit more. Work in the appropriate dimensions and..if you need to...use template as..well...a TEMPLATE. :P
That's all I got.
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