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Forum novel
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I was writing this so fast and i didn't focused much on english grammar, so don't be angry if you find a few mistakes.
Interesting chapter. I guess this will be surprising for you guys...(or maybe not)

’’Kira!?’’ Anubis screamed.
’’I came here to help! I grew up in wilderness and I know to fight! Help Drahcir! I will stay with Tiny and Sharky!’’ Kira yelled and run back to the walls of city Cikuro.
As Cen, Philus and Sonidow were fighting they meet each other in battle.
’’You have any problems guys!?’’ Philus yelled.
’’Not for now! Shall we combine our attacks and stick together?!’’ Sonidow replied.
’’I think that would be smart!’’ Cen said and defend Philus by one demon from behind.
’’Damn!’’ Philus screamed and stab the demon that fall dead on the ground.
They 3 were surrounded by demons. Very soon they started to charge on demons, quickly changing their positions. They were effective, protecting each other and killing demons. Mailliw stayed in city near the walls to help Sharky, Tiny and Kira. Demons were trying so hard to enter the city, but Mailliw with other fighters and guards were fighting so good that the demons had no chance. Harold and Alec were far from the door with guards on open battlefield. They were trying to help men so they can survive longer in battle. Soon the guards started to fly in the air like somebody was throwing them. King Nostro with his great mace started to striking at the guards.
’’Damn it! This one is to big!’’ Harold yelled.
’’I don’t care!!’’ Alec screamed and jumped on king Nostro.
Nostro defend himself with mace. Then Alec tried to throw a lot of glasses on him, but it was just turning into the silver dust.
’’You young fool! You think you’re the only one with powers!?’’ Nostro yelled and kick the Alec with his great mace.
’’Alec!! You take care for this intruder!’’ Harold screamed and commanded 10 guards to try and stop king Nostro.
After some time Harold was crushing and slashing demons trying to get to city. Tiny was shooting the demons near Harold and Alec so they can return.
For that time Anubis and Drahcir were fighting alone surrounded by demons. They were slashing and crushing everyone who gets close.
’’Who want more!?’’ Drahcir screamed on crowd of demons.
’’Let’s see what you 2 can do!’’ Suddenly Daymio appeared from black smoke in front of Drahcir and Anubis.
Daymio was moving fast trying to cut Anubis or Drahcir. Demons were helping to Daymio.
’’Daymio stop! You don’t have to do this!’’ Anubis yelled while he was fighting.
’’I came here to do what I must!! And I will kill you if you will be on my path!’’ Daymio screamed and angrily jumped on Anubis and Drahcir. Anubis and Drahcir fell down on the ground.
’’Daymio you known is dead! This is only a Wraith!’’ Drahcir yelled and made a great slash with his sword. His sword shine with red light and he threw demons away from them. King Nostro was already at the entrance of the city. Mailliw was trying to stop him but he couldn’t. Suddenly king Nostro hit Mailliw’s two blades and send Mailliw in one house through the window.
’’We have to help them at the gate! Come on!’’ Drahcir yelled and pulled Anubis for his hand.
Cen, Philus and Sonidow noticed what is happening at the main door so they all run to protect the gate. Drahcir was trying to reach his brother fighting with demons. Anubis started to circle around the king Nostro.
’’Do you really think you can win in this war, human?’’ Nostro said.
’’I am no human…’’ Anubis said and his sword started to burn.
Anubis’s eyes turned into cat’s, but they stayed black. The fluffs started to grow on his skin, and ears started to go on the top of head. His hair remained still the same.
Anubis turned into a tiger, but he was standing like a human.
’’So… you’re not usual monster as I saw these days.’’ Nostro answered unimpressed.
’’You will pay for that you came here! Look at your army… They are dieing very quickly. Our catapults will smash your army. You came on our territory, and you will die!’’ Anubis screamed.
’’You’re wrong kid!’’ Nostro yelled.
Then he swings with his mace on Anubis. Anubis stopped it with his sword and great anger, and then the real fight began.
Cen, Philus and Sonidow finally arrived at the time to the gate. They were trying to stop the demons to enter the city. However a lot of them came in so Tiny, Sharky and Kira were busy too. The end of battle was near. There were a lot of demons left, but they were in the distance, or else if they get closer on battlefield catapults would smash them. Anubis was getting tired fighting with Nostro.
’’Anubis you can’t defeat him!!! Run I will help you aahh!!’’ Sonidow was screaming, but then Daymio jumped on him.
’’I won’t pull back! I will kill him or I will die!’’ Anubis said to himself.
Then he lay down on the ground to escape the Nostro’s mace when Nostro winged. After he escaped the mace Anubis jumped and pushes his sword in Nostros shoulder. Nostro screamed and kicked Anubis down to the ground by breaking Anubis’s arm.
’’Gaah!!’’ Anubis screamed when he fallen on the ground with broken arm.
’’Anubis!!!’’ Kira yelled when saw him lying down on the ground, but she couldn’t do anything.
Cen, Philus and Sonidow started to run to save Anubis, by crushing the demons. Seems that they were to late. Nostro raised up again and pulled his small black sword.
’’You have honor kid. Pity…’’ Nostro said and stabbed Anubis near his heart.
’’Aaahhh!!!’’ Anubis screamed and falls on his knees.
’’We are going to the Ancient Lake!!! Leave this poor city my mighty demons!!’’ Nostro screamed and they all started to retreat.
Cen, Philus and Sonidow finally arrived to Anubis. Sonidow grab him for his shoulders to hold him.
’’I told you to stop!’’ Sonidow yelled.
’’Put me to the ground Sonidow…’’ Anubis said and Sonidow listened him.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XnPzR1-Dp2c

Soon all heroes gathered around Anubis. Kira came to him crying.
’’Come on! You can’t leave me now! Don’t leave me!’’
’’Kira… You have to be happy, for so many years. Don’t despair because of me. Who will teach my child how to fight and be happy…’’ Anubis was talking.
’’You got a child?’’ Cen asked.
’’He is about to born… It happened before I gone to city Quarzt. And now… My time has come. I was dreaming about that one day I will be able to defeat the Warlord. Seems that I wasn’t ready yet… Where in hell is that bastard Drahcir?’’ Anubis asked.
’’I am here Anubis.’’ Drahcir came to him.
’’I wasn’t strong enough… Please take my sword. Maybe you’re worthy of him more than I am. And please when time comes, give it to my child… I’m sure you will use it well…’’ Anubis said and Drahcir just give him a sadly look.
’’And you my brothers… Tiny and Sharky you stay here. Protect this beautiful city Cikuro. I learned many things here.’’ Anubis said more tired.
’’We will brother…’’ Tiny said with great sadness in himself.
The rain clouds started to moving. Soon you could see a clear blue sky with white clouds, beautiful rainbow and great sunshine. Kira kissed Anubis one more time.
’’I got only 1 wish before I die… please remember me guys. Let me stay in your hearts and you will not despair for me anymore. This is my best battle. The sun is shining… The sky is beautiful… And I can see your pretty face Kira…’’ Anubis said and his skin became white.
’’Strength and honor…’’ Anubis said and died.
Some peoples were still crying after him, mostly the ones who were close with him.
Soon another day passed… The heroes got one more victory with losing one of them…
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