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[Elias]

"Well so you want to save your friends, first of all you should get plenty of water because you don't wont to drink water in there, second I will warn you that you might well much weaker in there than in here, and third is that don't use any of your powers just use your weapon or hands because if you use one of you powers you will be stuck in there for your entire life, okay." Manji told them. Every body got bottles of water and Manji took a scroll from his sleeves. He opened it and started to draw things on the ground with his sword. The first thing he drew was three circles, each one of them was smaller than the other one then he drew strange symbols on the ground that looked like the one's that Japanese people write, in the end he drew an half angel, half demon looking creature, "okay it's ready, just need... oh yeah need a tea leaf." so he reached again into his sleeve and got a tea leaf."I think he has everything in that sleeve" whispered Philus into Cen ear. Then the drawing was glowing dark red and looked like a portal more. Manji was the first person to step in, then he vanished into the portal. "Well lets go guys" Cen said and ran into the portal and followed by Philus, Noir, and Malliw.
The land looked the same as the one they came from but every body except Manji felt weaker. They started to walk, after one minuet Manji said, "stop, something is coming and it's big and , on fire." "Well I don't see anything or hear anything" Noir said. Then I huge lizard that was burning in flames screamed. Manji t drew his sword and told every one to stay behind him, they obeyed and Manji ran towards the creature and slashed his sword on the creature's head and then it fell. "What was that?" Noir asked. "I have no clue" said Manji. The five people walked without getting near a monster for the whole day. "Manji, do people live here?" asked Cen. "No, all of them died long time ago before any of you ever born." said Manji.
After ours of walking, they reached the snow land. " We should rest for now. " " We can't, Sonidow and Drachi are in trouble. " Philus barked at Manji.
" It's only bean 5 hours in this world but 5 second in other world so we have plenty of time okay, you should remember everry thing you were taught and said to because in some moments they can save you and other people. " Manji said. They made a camp to rest for a while and Manji was guarding them. " I hope no one will enter from that portal." said Manji in a worrying tone.

This sound a little weird, doesn't it people.