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[Evil Sonidow]

Okay, I have a big change in the story.
How about the whole world that they are in vanish and the main people, the army, and Julian's castle go to another world, but I want to write all of that .
Also I hope everybody understand me.

I'm agaisnt it.

what does it help if we are suddenly in another world?
- why will the main people, the army and the castle go to another world? How? Why doesn't the rest? Don't tell me that the evil part of Manji is rescuing them
and another thing: What are they going to do after they defeated Julian then?

Valid questions, but the main point is that we shouldn't kill Julian so fast. He IS the main antagonist in the story, and if he's defeated that easily he just doesn't deserve that. Seriously, look at Zab's entry. Julian gave him the ring, made him powerful, and 'Z' treats him like someone else? That's totally disrespectful and as such he should be punished.

Well Reaper I was thinking Manji making some ancient ritual and he can't move everybody well how about instead of the army and the castle he just make the main people go to another world. Also the new Manji doesn't want to destroy the world, no way. Also did you read my last story, Manji and new Manji made a deal. Also it will give plenty of things to work on then we might have more char because they are in a new world, then the story will be longer and not that short.
I will edit more to this also if we are okay with this can some one make a new World Map.
Edit: Manji doesn't want to end the battle quicker he want's it to be big, a huge war that would be know for years.
Okay here is a sneak peak if enough people agree.
"Man this battle is so boring, I should make it more interesting, yes I know what to do."
Lame I know.

The story CAN be longer without doing time-travel crap. It's messy and it's going to be harder to come up with something new at the moment rather than adapting. Also, it's not 'Manji' that wants the battle to be big, it's you (and I agree, for this kind of war it has to be great, epic).
I'm glad you also know that's lame, and I will edit it if you write that because it completely sucks.