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[Reaper]

ok, I don't have many time, but:
- the map we have of our map is just a part of it, the part we now. Around it there could be other things.
- the army should soon come which could change some things and gives us new material
- Zab is either strong because he has the ring of a warlord or because the evil ghost is in his head. So he has some conflicts which make it ok that he is strong and he is evil which makes it also ok. I guess we need an enemy as strong as that, otherwise its too easy. as long as Manji is completely good, he shouldn't be able to defeat a warlord, even with the help of Noir. But for now its ok.
- If you need a female char, invent one. I guess the army should soon meet us and there are probably quite some female fighters.
- why closing the forum novel? If nobody wants to go on, nobody is writing. If somebody has an idea, he writes.
- @ES: I wasn't thinking about defeating him now. Especially about Z there must happen many things fto end this. and I don't want to end it. But I already think about the ending.
- also @ES: I guess Z is atm intoxicated by his own might. That would be a reason why he talks to Julian like that. Nevertheless you have a point that Julian shouldn't accept that. But he knows that Z wouldn't have a chance against him anyway.
- Have to go off, could have written some crap which I will hate after thinking about it but anyway.