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[Evil Sonidow]

The main problem is that you all fail to respect hierarchy. Julian is A LOT stronger than Z is. He MUST respect him or DIE. Worse part is that Julian gives the impression to be a pussy because he lets subordinates treat him like that.

Also, a message for Pi-face and Zab: STOP MAKING YOUR CHARS OVERLY POWERFUL. It's ridiculous.

I think you're reading too deeply into my posts. :P

Just because my character doesn't respect Julian doesn't mean he's stronger than him. My character has his own agenda and doesn't like taking orders from anyone else. It's obvious a deal was made. But what it consisted of is a mystery as of now.

Not too deeply. Anyone with average reading skills will notice that it looks disrespectful.
Also, not like your mystery is thrilling at the moment. I don't see any reason to see to it.

- the map we have of our map is just a part of it, the part we now. Around it there could be other things.
- the army should soon come which could change some things and gives us new material

I agree with this completely.

- Zab is either strong because he has the ring of a warlord or because the evil ghost is in his head. So he has some conflicts which make it ok that he is strong and he is evil which makes it also ok. I guess we need an enemy as strong as that, otherwise its too easy. as long as Manji is completely good, he shouldn't be able to defeat a warlord, even with the help of Noir. But for now its ok.

As said before, nobody can defeat a warlord through normal means. That means NOBODY. So Drahcir? You left a plothole. Good for us~

1anwser: Well I hope we can expend the map 5X bigger because it's so small, for me.

Don't see a problem.

2anwser: Yeah, the army could give as new material but don't think that much.

It's an army with greater intelligence and equipment. They can give us some fair improvement in terms of material.

4anwser: Why dose every main char in this story has to be a fighter, look I'm gonna replace me with Manji, and I'm not that much of a fighter.

I pointed out when we started that if we had a diversificated group it'd be more fun, because we could complement each others abilities, eg. warrior, wizard, ranger, rogue, cleric, etc. But everybody chose to go with melee and stuff like fire/ice. So much for creativity.

5anwser: Well I just suggest we could close it down while we discus this.

No.

Okay I will make me Elias or Pi-Face but his name will be Elias and he will represent me. He will from Earth and can he bring just one electronic a PSP okay that's all.
PSP, strands for PlayStation Portable.

We know what PSP is. And no.

"I guess Z is atm intoxicated by his own might." epic post. XD

Not.

She wears an intimidating lion’s mask passed down in her family. It is the mask that lets everyone know her title as the “Forest Guardian”. She has never taken it off because, in her family, there is a curse placed among the women. It is said that if someone were to gaze upon her eyes…a terrible fate would befall them.

Reminds me of Medusa.

A woman with power beyond the scope of warlords. There is no known extent to her power and she never uses it on her own. Only those who seek her out have the ability to use and control her power for their own ambition. She is a goddess who roams the earth and no one knows about her.

Change this to something else, because it's crappy (eufemism).