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[Lord Anu]

I know that our story is going to fast with poor descriptions of the whole combat and feelings between characters. When we are fighting in combat, there are like thousands creatures fighting, but we are describing only how heroes fight because we are quick... Also we don't have much time to describe feelings between characters, they just talk and travel together(I tried to put Anubis, Drahcir, Alec and Harold in one tavern to improve their relationship and new kind of hanging out. I also tried to put Kira as Anubis's wife to show that we[even as a heroes] can love somebody the most on the whole world. We are only hanging out in combat and in traveling).
My suggestion is that we must slow down with writing. Even if somebody write something before you(no matter you can continue on his part), it happened to me so many times. The action is going to quickly... army of prince Noir already reached the Castle Firend and they are doing final battle with Julian and his servants. You can make that Julian and his servetants win and that the Noir with heroes and army pull back OR you can do that Noir with heroes(you guys) and army defeat Julian and that Julian then pull back to some other more deeper and darker place(if you choose the option 2. , that means I must improve our world-map).