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Forum novel
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First of all Reaper let me tell something, first of all Manji doesn't want to save Z he want's The Crimson One to go back to his planet.
Also try to not write so many short chapters.

Ah, soft, soft grass. Man I wish I had that type of grass at my backyard, but right now isn't time to thinks about this grass, right now I must know where I am.So I stood up and looked around where I was. It looked like a forest but how can I be in the forest when I was outside in Virginia. And it doesn't feel hot. Maybe I'm somewhere, no no no. I can't be somewhere in Virginia, also what is that strange bracelet on my hand. It looks like one of the sticks that glow in the dark, but it glows right now, it's a perfect circle like it was made on my hand, and I feel some strange power inside it.I looked and I saw some land that looks like there was an explosion near the lake . I started walking towards it and thought.How can I be here and what is this bracelet. Okay, time to think of possible things. Hmm, only one idea come to my mind is that I'm in a another dimension in a world far away with magical powers and similar stuff.When I reached the explosion area it felt cool but still as it was made couple of hours ago or days. Then I saw some foot prints, and they looked like a humans.I should follow them maybe I can find a town or people that can help me. I started walking towards the foot prints, and looked at the landscape.Man is this beautiful, uhh I wish they had this type of forest in Virginia. I walked ours before seeing a town. When I reached the town it looked so medieval. I thought where to go, and the best place is the tavern, so I started looking for one.Man my cloths look so weird in here, but it might just help.The words and everything looked in English, and people talked in English. Then I found the tavern.

Okay that's all for me, Elias. Also can some one write short about how he founds some one like Alec or any of the main char in the story just a short and make him playful and not all to confused okay.
Time for Sophie.

Ah. Where am I? Hm, it looks like some forest, and a beautiful one.I looked around and found I was somewhere far away from Virginia., or America. The I looked at my hair and the color of them changed.That's strange first I'm in some where unknown and the landscape that I never see before or heard to have that during winter, also my hair color changed from brown to red and I feel some strange power inside me. I stood up and took one more look. Then I saw some weird shape far away and it looked like a human walking away from me. I started running towards him but I couldn't get near him, maybe it's because it was far away.I guess I should just walk, maybe it is going some village or a town. This place looks so weird, maybe I'm in some other world. My older brother always says that nothing is impossible. Maybe it's true that I'm in another world. Well The only thing I should just find a village, maybe some one could help. After some hours of walking I could see a town. I was so happy to see a town. So I started walking faster. After some more time I was in front gates of the town. I went inside and looked around. It looked so medieval. I started walking around the town hopping I could find some one familiar or that could help me.

Okay here I end hope you like it and nobody please write about Sophie, but can write how I (Elias) finds some main chat.(just like I said before)
I am back, not really.
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Forum novel - by Reaper - 07-30-2009, 05:22 PM
RE: Forum novel - by The Lost Global Mod - 07-30-2009, 05:26 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 07-30-2009, 06:09 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Drahcir - 07-30-2009, 08:49 PM
RE: Forum novel - by no one - 07-31-2009, 05:47 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Daymio - 07-31-2009, 08:57 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Ascor - 07-31-2009, 10:33 AM
RE: Forum novel - by chase123 - 07-31-2009, 12:51 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Lord Anu - 07-31-2009, 08:07 PM
RE: Forum novel - by The Lost Global Mod - 07-31-2009, 09:08 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Evil Sonidow - 08-01-2009, 04:24 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Ascor - 08-01-2009, 11:32 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-01-2009, 01:55 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Lord Anu - 08-01-2009, 02:17 PM
RE: Forum novel - by The Lost Global Mod - 08-01-2009, 05:01 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Simoneon - 08-02-2009, 10:41 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 08-02-2009, 06:48 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Drahcir - 08-02-2009, 07:46 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-03-2009, 03:03 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 08-03-2009, 07:32 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-05-2009, 07:28 PM
RE: Forum novel - by no one - 08-06-2009, 03:09 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 08-07-2009, 04:52 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-07-2009, 08:36 PM
RE: Forum novel - by no one - 08-08-2009, 05:00 AM
RE: Forum novel - by The Lost Global Mod - 08-08-2009, 12:31 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Lord Anu - 08-09-2009, 06:25 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 08-12-2009, 04:50 PM
RE: Forum novel - by no one - 08-13-2009, 05:13 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-14-2009, 06:56 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-15-2009, 02:10 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Drahcir - 08-15-2009, 03:49 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 08-15-2009, 04:52 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Drahcir - 08-17-2009, 05:52 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-17-2009, 07:20 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-18-2009, 02:58 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Lord Anu - 08-18-2009, 10:06 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-18-2009, 03:05 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Drahcir - 08-19-2009, 03:20 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Lord Anu - 08-19-2009, 01:57 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Drahcir - 08-20-2009, 03:30 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-20-2009, 04:11 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-20-2009, 02:42 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 08-21-2009, 12:57 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Daymio - 08-21-2009, 01:41 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-21-2009, 03:52 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 08-21-2009, 05:53 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Drahcir - 08-21-2009, 06:43 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-21-2009, 07:36 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-21-2009, 07:57 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Drahcir - 08-22-2009, 03:01 AM
RE: Forum novel - by The Lost Global Mod - 08-22-2009, 05:30 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-22-2009, 06:36 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-23-2009, 02:12 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 08-23-2009, 04:41 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-24-2009, 02:09 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-25-2009, 10:26 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Drahcir - 08-25-2009, 11:53 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-26-2009, 12:25 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-26-2009, 01:20 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-26-2009, 02:01 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-26-2009, 03:33 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-26-2009, 01:15 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 08-26-2009, 02:15 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Daymio - 08-29-2009, 11:04 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Ascor - 08-29-2009, 06:32 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-30-2009, 02:53 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 08-30-2009, 01:39 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 08-30-2009, 11:05 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 08-31-2009, 01:34 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Lord Anu - 09-01-2009, 03:05 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 09-07-2009, 03:40 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Lord Anu - 09-12-2009, 11:30 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Reaper - 09-12-2009, 02:57 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 09-12-2009, 03:34 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Zabobula - 09-13-2009, 01:47 PM
RE: Forum novel - by Lord Anu - 09-19-2009, 04:23 AM
RE: Forum novel - by Elias - 09-19-2009, 01:50 PM



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