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Forum novel
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I wrote this on my mobile phone,(takes me an hours and was annoying too) and right now I am at Daymio and I will post this. I edited a little when I see a few changes, but nothing much... This chapter is more like a guide post which will remind you where you are and what is going on all around. I didn't wanted to go on with action for now... Later.

Rain wasn't falling for days in city Cikuro. All the dark clouds moved northeast, to land covered always with darkness and dust. Now only fog remain in west lands. Sun and the sky were covered by a lot of wired clouds. The graveyard was all in thick fog, that you could wedge into one grave with no problem. There was one man... standing and looking into one grave. Then other mean appeared and came to this one whom was standing quietly.
''We can't change the past right?'' Sharky said with sad voice.
''No... But we can change the future.'' Tiny answered seriously and cold on his question like he feel no pain for his brother.
''And how... How you're planing to change the future!? By sitting in this city and do nothing!!?'' Sharky screamed.
''We are here, because it was last Anubis's wish!!! To protect this city and Kira!! You think this is not hard for me!!?'' Tiny started to screaming on Sharky and then he suddenly get tired, so he sit on the wet ground.
Then there was a little pause, but Sharky sit near Tiny and started with talk again.
''Why Kira won't come here and pray for his husband?'' Sharky asked.
''It's to hard for her, to come here... She cannot accept the fact that Anubis is dead. That is just running away from sadly true.''
''Do you know where are all the heroes?'' Sharky asked again.
''I heard that Drahcir and Sonidow are taken as prisoners in Castle Firend by Julian. Cen, Philus and Mailliw has gone to help Drahcir and Sonidow without any army...''
''Very brave...'' Sharky interrupted Tiny, but Tiny continued.
''Long, Simoneon, Harold and Alec are in the east woods with small army from city Cikuro...''
''And prince Noir?'' Sharky become a little boring with questions and Tiny realized that.
''I don't know... I think that he gone with Cen, Philus and Mailliw too. Come on now brother, let's drink something.'' Tiny said.
Sharky already stand up and started to walk, but Tiny put one flower he was holding on Anubis grave and said:
''Live in peace my brother... I'm sure you're on better place now. I hope you will wait for us together with Mayon. I will meet you again brother... I will...''
''Hey Tiny! Are you coming!?'' Sharky screamed and broke his thoughts.
Tiny put his hand on Anubis's grave and then left the graveyard with Sharky. As them two were walking through the streets peoples were looking at them with sadness on their faces. Peoples know what they lost and how they feel. Soon Tiny and Sharky arrived at the square from where you could see one big tavern. There at square they saw two children, wearing strange clothes.
''Hey who are this kids, and what are that funny clothes on them?'' Sharky asked again.
''You think that I know? Actually I don't care. Let's go and drink something.'' Tiny said and so they left them and gone to drink something.
Soon the night come and another day passed. Tiny and Sharky gone to palace in their rooms to be with their two wifes. But Kira... Kira was on her bed in palace. She was still crying... And she did not dare to take a look on graveyard. On graveyard where lied the body of person she like the most. Anubis's body who was resting in cold and peace...
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