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-Gunpowder and real world
This gunpowder just doesn't fit in story... You Elias is trying to mix two worlds, our real world and this world in our novel. You can't do that, it's just to much and I doubt people will like that. You can't mix two worlds because it's not working about it in this story(it's working about war with Julian) and there are to many important characters from this new world, you can't just put some new characters from different worlds.
-Dying
As for dying, I killed Anubis to show you example how some characters could die. I killed him, but I didn't lost interest in novel, I keep writing. And who said that all good characters will die!? For now I count only Philus and Simoneon... All the others can survive. Especially Harold, I was working so hard to create a relationship between him and Arbina.
BTW: Where is Zab? I haven't seen him online for long time. He miss me, there is nobody to criticize my posts
This gunpowder just doesn't fit in story... You Elias is trying to mix two worlds, our real world and this world in our novel. You can't do that, it's just to much and I doubt people will like that. You can't mix two worlds because it's not working about it in this story(it's working about war with Julian) and there are to many important characters from this new world, you can't just put some new characters from different worlds.
-Dying
As for dying, I killed Anubis to show you example how some characters could die. I killed him, but I didn't lost interest in novel, I keep writing. And who said that all good characters will die!? For now I count only Philus and Simoneon... All the others can survive. Especially Harold, I was working so hard to create a relationship between him and Arbina.
BTW: Where is Zab? I haven't seen him online for long time. He miss me, there is nobody to criticize my posts
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