10-14-2009, 08:31 PM
I felt so free pointing out the proportion-issues:
![[Image: 2emigi0.jpg]](http://i34.tinypic.com/2emigi0.jpg)
oh noez, now everybody knows how I write :o
Well, what does this diagram want to say?
~ your char is 2px higher than Jack. Not THAT important, but...
~ ...the chin is too high-up
~ the waist is 2 px too high-up again
Also, without looking at the proportions, your char seems to "fall" towards the front. His legs remind me of the first falling-sprite of any char. He should be more upright.
Anyways, pretty well shaded etc. Oh, and welcome back
![[Image: 2emigi0.jpg]](http://i34.tinypic.com/2emigi0.jpg)
oh noez, now everybody knows how I write :o
Well, what does this diagram want to say?
~ your char is 2px higher than Jack. Not THAT important, but...
~ ...the chin is too high-up
~ the waist is 2 px too high-up again
Also, without looking at the proportions, your char seems to "fall" towards the front. His legs remind me of the first falling-sprite of any char. He should be more upright.
Anyways, pretty well shaded etc. Oh, and welcome back
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
~ Breaking LFE since 2008 ~
"Freeze, you're under vrest!" - Mark, probably.
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