10-19-2009, 01:43 PM
Don't rush your spriting
There are many flaws in this sprite. For an instance, look at the shaded part of the hair. It isn't textured.
The clothes look like they are pillow shaded (especially the pants), and the eyes look generaly wierd. His upper body is bigger than his lower body.
And I don't know about his pose, there is something 'wrong' about it, you know these kind of things you just can't point out.
Don't get me wrong, you have improved a great lot
Just give yourself some more time and try to develop getting proportions right :P
There are many flaws in this sprite. For an instance, look at the shaded part of the hair. It isn't textured.
The clothes look like they are pillow shaded (especially the pants), and the eyes look generaly wierd. His upper body is bigger than his lower body.
And I don't know about his pose, there is something 'wrong' about it, you know these kind of things you just can't point out.
Don't get me wrong, you have improved a great lot
Just give yourself some more time and try to develop getting proportions right :P