12-25-2009, 10:24 AM
the face's shading isn't on the same level as the rest of the body's shading.
you might add some neck there.. even tigers got one.gif)
just a little bit.. make you sure you don't overdo it..
the stripes in his face look awfull.. especially the thin ones.. either way remove the thin ones or make them thick just as the others.. (personally would use option 1). you could make ears a bit less round.. now they look like the ears of a bear.
plus you should make the stripes on his left foot (from our perspective) longer. just a bit.
the chest looks weird as elias said already.. because the trousers just start .. with an regular line.. make it more irregular.. look at davis for reference.. at the ending of the trousers you could make the "torn parts" a bit more irregular..
that's it. ^^
you might add some neck there.. even tigers got one
.gif)
just a little bit.. make you sure you don't overdo it..
the stripes in his face look awfull.. especially the thin ones.. either way remove the thin ones or make them thick just as the others.. (personally would use option 1). you could make ears a bit less round.. now they look like the ears of a bear.
plus you should make the stripes on his left foot (from our perspective) longer. just a bit.
the chest looks weird as elias said already.. because the trousers just start .. with an regular line.. make it more irregular.. look at davis for reference.. at the ending of the trousers you could make the "torn parts" a bit more irregular..
that's it. ^^
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should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday
should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday
