Need help with face pic(edited)

[Eddie]

nope i mean ur shrt has some green pisels here an the i cleaned it and the inward folded collar flap i made it outwards and his Hair is added wid more shadows and highlights.

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Ofcourse Hi face

Is it Good?

you put too much chin on it. His chin is supposed to be rounded, not pointed otherwise it looks wierd. I'd suggest having the flap the other way anywho, that's how his body is positioned.. it's like taking a shot where his head turns slightly. Also, if you look at the hair, you've randomly seemed to place shadows and highlights. There's no definite direction that the light seems to come from, so it makes it look rather... dodgy?