I have to agree with alec. Actually they are quite nice( though, as he pointed out, glow needs a bit of work.)
I somehow like the first one, the whole design just fits for me. All the c + p stuff is neatly made, so maybe you want to go over to redrawing more stuff.
Two little tips:
- Keep in mind that you shouldn't use fully saturated("neon") colours like in unnamed #2. they just don't look realisitic.
- A common mistake is to make the hair too small like you did for Erichthonius. Look at the hair of other LF2-chars and try to make it in a similar size.
- aw, third thing, what the heck? Anyway, don't name your thread something with idiot or sucky. They aren't and it won't make you feel good. Though you also shouldn't call it "amazing", "great", "fantastic"
Oh and there is an option for the poll between awesome and not good missing...
I somehow like the first one, the whole design just fits for me. All the c + p stuff is neatly made, so maybe you want to go over to redrawing more stuff.
Two little tips:
- Keep in mind that you shouldn't use fully saturated("neon") colours like in unnamed #2. they just don't look realisitic.
- A common mistake is to make the hair too small like you did for Erichthonius. Look at the hair of other LF2-chars and try to make it in a similar size.
- aw, third thing, what the heck? Anyway, don't name your thread something with idiot or sucky. They aren't and it won't make you feel good. Though you also shouldn't call it "amazing", "great", "fantastic"
Oh and there is an option for the poll between awesome and not good missing...