Contest #9: Writing challenge - Voting

[Silverthorn]

Man, I actually did it. And that without Phil bothering, haha :P

Alright, during the reading, I took some notes. Pretty much written for myself, but it might serve as some sort of legitimation for my voting-decision. Kinda straight to the point, if I may say so:

dubbleD: kinda psychic, only at the end it starts clearing up, the stuff before is relatively confusing
Hacker: “Well played Victor… Well played”, Robert said holding the Knife he dropped before in his Hand. -- what? confusing and open-ended.
Gad: evasive, the "jokes" do not fit to the beginning, serious grammar-issues
Elias: massive spelling-mistakes, "the rider got out of his horse" -- must be painful for the horse, "and to cock food" -- no comment, also didn't finish the story
Reaper: adequate choice of words, building up tension flawlessly, round characters --------- vote
Wiro: how the hell do you stab yourself when carrying a sword? random events, depicting situation ludicrously
Magnamancy: convincing, "phantasmic realistic", round character ---------- vote
Taniaetc: surprising course of events, yet executed quite well ---------- vote
Phil: good execution, minor orthography-mistakes ----------- vote
forgetlatios: comments in story=bad, atypical story-line

Yes, I was paying attention to those that actually brought their story to an end. I am aware that it just said "continue the story"; however, a continuation stopping right at the climax is not what I was looking for.

The Lost Global Mod edited this post 05-09-2010 05:26 PM because:

lol you never stop to surprise me