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What's bugging me about the karate davis is that some parts of his old trowsers are still visible. Same with the recoloured one. also karate-davis is lacking shading.
Other than that they are not too bad. What you have to avoid is using those fully saturated (aka. neon) colours. Especially the recoloured guy has that problem.
Itachi looks ok, but I'd prefer a slightly brighter tone so that you can see shadows and highlights. Additionally, please stick to a neutral background, the red hurts the eyes over time. I prefer the first version btw.
Still, not bad for a newcomer. I'd like to see some more, but I'd advice you not to do sratches yet, stick to a base for now.
Other than that they are not too bad. What you have to avoid is using those fully saturated (aka. neon) colours. Especially the recoloured guy has that problem.
Itachi looks ok, but I'd prefer a slightly brighter tone so that you can see shadows and highlights. Additionally, please stick to a neutral background, the red hurts the eyes over time. I prefer the first version btw.
Still, not bad for a newcomer. I'd like to see some more, but I'd advice you not to do sratches yet, stick to a base for now.