[BG] ^Arx Leviathanis^ updated 02/06/2010

[YinYin]

i expected the big stone neck in the background to actually move in the background - unmoving it seems stuck to the wall in front of it (its much further away than the big head on the plain image)

you could rise the wooden tower things a bit so we can acutally see some more of them
and also the sky background cause the mountains would really add to the scene

why are the flags facing each other? wind coming from both directions? oh well - the flag-bamboo problem is more distressing

the right fire breather cold move seperatley from the foreground to add depth

i also think the ground you are standing on could use a bit more perspective to fit with the ground behind it (making the front wider)

and whats up with the ^ ^

>The fire has 'dark areas', which make it look artificial
mhh... that's the best flames I can find for the pair of dragon heads... so I cannot do much about it >:

you can increase the opacity near the bright center and decrease it towads the dark outline
be careful to preserve the shape tho


not bad but a bit too thin and too much of a distraction for my liking - not going into my permanently installed bg collection :p