07-11-2010, 02:48 AM
holy crap! the tattoo's!!!
well i like the idea tht its on his body but it doesn't fit well on his face...
It doesn't show his neck very clearly making it so that he is actually leaning forward...
The hair is also standing straight up, might i suggest adding less hair between his forehead but in the center of should leave some room, Like Vegeta hair on the front? not the style just for the front part, i guess...?
You might also want to make room for his legs...spacing it out...
The shoes need to be clean and the light should be noticeable from the light
however i do like how u arranged the shading on the pants pretty up-beat punk style u got goin there.gif)
tht seems to be all for now...
well i like the idea tht its on his body but it doesn't fit well on his face...
It doesn't show his neck very clearly making it so that he is actually leaning forward...
The hair is also standing straight up, might i suggest adding less hair between his forehead but in the center of should leave some room, Like Vegeta hair on the front? not the style just for the front part, i guess...?
You might also want to make room for his legs...spacing it out...
The shoes need to be clean and the light should be noticeable from the light
however i do like how u arranged the shading on the pants pretty up-beat punk style u got goin there
.gif)
tht seems to be all for now...
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