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07-13-2010, 04:59 PM
I'm assuming the post above will be removed for its absolute uselessness.
What Betit is trying to say is this:
Chest is a bit too rounded, it should have a slightly more square appearance to it.
Also it is relatively too wide. Look in the picture above that betitngoan has posted. Your lats (back and underarm region) should be more visible than the chest. The chest shouldn't expand that wide otherwise it will limit/hinder movement of the arms.
It should also have a bit of shading at the top of the chest (squaring it off).
In general though, nice sprite. It looks good.
Eddie
What Betit is trying to say is this:
Chest is a bit too rounded, it should have a slightly more square appearance to it.
Also it is relatively too wide. Look in the picture above that betitngoan has posted. Your lats (back and underarm region) should be more visible than the chest. The chest shouldn't expand that wide otherwise it will limit/hinder movement of the arms.
It should also have a bit of shading at the top of the chest (squaring it off).
In general though, nice sprite. It looks good.
Eddie
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