07-29-2010, 12:54 PM
Again, your sprites need longer arms, and define the elbow in the sprite. Paul's legs are too skinny, plus doesn't he have muscular arms? As usual, I say try not to make the body rigid. Try a different pose, instead of the usual stand stance.
The girl doesn't look natural, the body could use more shading, the clothing needs a hint of dark shade (for the shadows), and finally the flat chest, I'd suggest taking a look at a few girl sprites, because your perspective is off.
The girl doesn't look natural, the body could use more shading, the clothing needs a hint of dark shade (for the shadows), and finally the flat chest, I'd suggest taking a look at a few girl sprites, because your perspective is off.